Tanmay's response effectively demonstrates his experience in using data analytics to optimize a marketing campaign, aligning well with the benchmark response. He clearly identifies the metrics used, such as engagement rates and conversion rates, and describes actionable insights derived from the data, such as adjusting posting schedules and content types. His response shows applied experience relevant to the job description, particularly in data analysis and decision-making. To enhance his response, Tanmay could have provided more detail on the tools or technologies used in the analysis process.