Bhushan's response is detailed and demonstrates his hands-on experience with developing data pipelines, particularly his approach to optimizing performance by batching Kafka logs. He provides a clear example of a challenge he faced and the solution he implemented, which is relevant to the job role. However, the response could be more concise and focused on the most critical aspects of the challenge and solution. Additionally, Bhushan could articulate the impact of his optimization on the overall system performance and efficiency.