Rishabh's introduction provides basic personal and educational background but lacks depth in professional experience. He mentions his familiarity with tools like SQL, Excel, Google Sheets, Tableau, and Power BI, aligning with the job requirements. However, he does not elaborate on his practical experience or achievements, which would demonstrate his applied knowledge and expertise. To improve, Rishabh could discuss specific projects or accomplishments, such as creating efficient reporting systems or dashboards, similar to the benchmark response, to showcase his proficiency and impact in previous roles.