Tanmay's response lacks detail and specificity compared to the benchmark. While the benchmark response highlights relevant skills, projects, and internships, Tanmay's actual response is missing. To improve, Tanmay should provide a concise summary of his educational background, relevant projects, and skills in Python, MySQL, and Power BI. Mentioning internships and eagerness to learn would also align better with the job description and demonstrate a proactive attitude towards the role.