Tanmay's response lists several tools and languages used for data analysis, including Python, R, Excel, Tableau, Power BI, and SQL. However, the response lacks specific examples of projects where these tools were applied effectively, which is crucial for demonstrating practical experience. The benchmark response provides a clear example, detailing the use of Python and SQL in a specific project. Tanmay could improve by elaborating on a particular project, describing how these tools were used to achieve specific outcomes.