Ajay's response provides a detailed account of a specific issue he encountered with AOSP and his role in resolving it. He explains the steps taken to analyze the problem, collaborate with the framework team, and create a tool to reproduce the issue. However, the response could be more concise and focused on the key outcomes of his involvement. Ajay could improve by summarizing the problem, his approach to collaboration, and the resolution more succinctly, emphasizing the impact on the project and the lessons learned, as demonstrated in the benchmark response.