Tanmay's response lacks clarity and relevance as it appears to be a placeholder or an error code rather than an actual answer. The benchmark response provides a clear understanding of Tanmay's eagerness to learn and adapt to new technologies, even without direct experience. Tanmay should have articulated his enthusiasm for learning big data tools and his foundational knowledge in cloud concepts, as mentioned in the benchmark response. Providing specific examples from his internship experience would have strengthened his answer.