Sunil's response lacks clarity and detail compared to the benchmark response. While he mentions installing Windows and preparing systems for new employees, he does not provide a structured walkthrough of the process. The response is somewhat disorganized and does not cover key aspects like driver updates, software installation, or network configuration, which are crucial for a comprehensive setup. To improve, Sunil could have detailed each step of the installation process, including specific tasks like software and driver installation, and network setup.