Swami's response provides a broad overview of her background and experiences but lacks clarity and organization. The introduction is muddled with inaccuracies, such as incorrectly stating her name and not clearly linking her experiences to the role of a Business Analyst. Additionally, the mention of tools and skills is somewhat disjointed. A more structured response that clearly outlines her education, relevant experiences, and specific skills related to the role would enhance her presentation. For improvement, Swami could have said, "Certainly, my name is Shubhangi, and I am currently pursuing a Post Graduate Diploma in Product Management. I have gained valuable experience through internships in marketing and product management, where I developed strategies and created dashboards. Recently, I have also explored business analytics and Agile methodologies, which I believe will help me contribute effectively to this role."