Shivangi's response lacks depth and specificity compared to the benchmark response. While she mentions her current experience in sales and a desire to gain confidence and opportunities, she does not articulate a clear understanding of the sales role or how it aligns with her career goals. A stronger response would include specific aspects of sales that appeal to her, such as the dynamic nature of the job, the opportunity to build relationships, and the motivation to achieve targets, as seen in the benchmark response.