Vishal's response lacks coherence and clarity, making it difficult to assess his fit for the role. The response does not directly address the question or demonstrate his comfort with the responsibilities and skills required for the position. Unlike the benchmark response, which clearly outlines relevant experience and skills, Vishal's response is fragmented and lacks depth. To improve, Vishal could have clearly stated his familiarity with advanced Excel, data handling, and reporting tools, and expressed confidence in supporting decision-making processes.