Tanmay's response lacks detail and specificity compared to the benchmark. The benchmark response highlights relevant skills, experience, and enthusiasm for the role, which are missing in Tanmay's answer. To improve, Tanmay should focus on mentioning specific skills, tools, and experiences that align with the job description, such as proficiency in Python, SQL, and experience with data visualization tools. Additionally, expressing a proactive attitude towards learning and collaboration would strengthen the response.