Tanmay's response lacks depth and specificity compared to the benchmark. While Tanmay introduces themselves, they miss highlighting key aspects such as their educational achievements, specific skills relevant to the job, and experiences from internships that align with the role. To improve, Tanmay could mention their engineering degree, CGPA, and specific skills like network security and communication. Additionally, discussing their passion for data engineering and relevant internship experiences would demonstrate a stronger fit for the role.