Mohit's response shows that he is willing to help his peers and share his knowledge, which is commendable. However, his answer lacks detail about the specific steps he took to assist his friend and the impact of his initiative. To improve, Mohit could describe how he identified the opportunity, offered assistance, provided guidance and resources, supported hands-on, and followed up, as outlined in the benchmark response. This would demonstrate a more proactive and structured approach to taking initiative and solving problems outside his assigned responsibilities.