Vishal's response provides examples of actionable data insights but lacks specific details about his role and the tools or methods used. While he mentions handling similar tasks in a previous role, the response does not demonstrate the depth of knowledge or specific contributions expected for the role. The benchmark response provides a clearer picture of the candidate's involvement, tools used, and the impact of their work. Vishal could improve by detailing his direct contributions, tools used, and the outcomes of his actions.