Tanmay's response lacks depth and specificity compared to the benchmark. While he mentions his education and some technical skills, he does not provide detailed examples of his achievements or how they align with the job role. The benchmark response highlights specific accomplishments and how they contributed to business improvements, which Tanmay's response misses. To improve, Tanmay could have detailed his experience with specific tools and the impact of his work, similar to the benchmark response, to better demonstrate his fit for the role.